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We will be together.

I can hear your laughter,
like music chimes on the wind.
And your smile is radiance,
like the sun it warms me.

Your touch is soft and gentle,
fingers brush tears from my cheek.
And I taste your lips against mine,
sweeter than any chocolate.

But you become ash in my mouth,
and slip through my fingers like sand.
For you are a hope and a dream,
a lie my mind made and my heart believes.

Are you real or just a phantom,
a simple figment of my rumination?
Do you stare at the same stars in longing,
or are you like the void that separates them?

My heart says that you too are waiting,
for what cradles you in imagination.

We will be together.

Someday.
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I am, by my own admitance, a 'hopeless romantic'. I believe that there is someone special out there who completes me and I believe that someday we will find each other. It is a very intimidating thought, thinking that ONE PERSON is out there in this big crazy old world, and I frequently find myself fighting despair at not having found her yet.

I can see her in my mind, feel her fingers intertwined with my own. Could she possibly be real, or am I suffering a delusion?

Still, I hold onto hope and press on because sometimes that's all any of us can do!

Comments and critiques are always welcome.

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I know that feeling :) [link] A piece I write about hopeless romantics. You don't have to read it or comment, thought you might be interested. Nice to see people with similar ideas sometimes.

But as a general critique, be careful of cliches: laughter and chimes, sun and smile, lips and chocolate, stars and longing. The 4th stanza is probably my favourite
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~LupusIntus Jan 23, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks for commenting!
I see being a hopeless romantic a blessing and a curse: we know what we want in a lover and don't waste much time on meaningless relationships (hopefully) but we must also suffer through great lengths of loneliness as we wait and search and wait and search.

It's simply what we must do to find our special someone! :)
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=Red-Soulfire Jan 2, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Ohh this is so beautiful. ;u;
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~LupusIntus Jan 2, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you so much for saying so! :heart:
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~Annuski Jan 1, 2013  Student Writer
She's out there for you!!! Don't despair!!! This poem is amazing, and when you find her you should let her see this =)
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~LupusIntus Jan 1, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you so much for saying so! It really means a lot to me to hear such nice compliments. :heart: :D :heart:

And when I find her, I'll definitely show her!
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*hazeltown Dec 31, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
This is vivid & rich.
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Mood: Affection ~LupusIntus Dec 31, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you!!!!!!!!
It means SO MUCH to me to get a compliment like that! :heart: :D :heart
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~DinosurGirl Dec 30, 2012  Student Writer
I agree <333
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~LupusIntus Dec 30, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I'm glad. :D
Let's keep hoping and pressing on till we find them, kay? :heart:
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